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How can I put into words
this short-circuit, electric
screeching halt
to all things logical.
Wires rerouted from my brain
to send impulses to my heart -
thumping out a Morse code
of thoughts
and feelings
only to get lost in translation as
"I like your shoes."
(But your smile at my desperation
for perfect words
and a right time
is worth any embarrassment.)
this short-circuit, electric
screeching halt
to all things logical.
Wires rerouted from my brain
to send impulses to my heart -
thumping out a Morse code
of thoughts
and feelings
only to get lost in translation as
"I like your shoes."
(But your smile at my desperation
for perfect words
and a right time
is worth any embarrassment.)
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Any suggestions on how to break this up? I don't have a lot of experience with Slam Poetry, which is the style I was going for here, but a friend introduced me to Lauren Zuniga a few weeks ago and I've been wanting to try it out. It sounds a lot better spoken than it looks typed.
Finally worked out a title. -laughs-
- Celia
Finally worked out a title. -laughs-
- Celia
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